Illusive Woman

Illusive Woman

A Poem by wordman
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Great rhyme, superb choice of words to sketch the near perfect beauty. Some women have it all.

Posted 7 Years Ago


 wordman

7 Years Ago

thank you very much,you could fit right in that photo
Tremendous reversal of my sense at the end, I was pulled in, then dashed with the reality of vogue. Neat rhymes and wonderful flow... Nicely penned...

Posted 7 Years Ago


 wordman

7 Years Ago

thank you silinte,i appreciate your review
apennylate

7 Years Ago

Of course...
Love it word man very nice imagery in this piece.

Posted 7 Years Ago


 wordman

7 Years Ago

thank you benita ,appreciate your visit
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

7 Years Ago

I've missed visiting I thought I'd stop by I'll try to more even if things for the better change in.. read more
ooooo Wordman this is really good! Well done my friend. I like the picture.

Posted 7 Years Ago


 wordman

7 Years Ago

well i thank you ,for the long awaited visit,lol
Ron this piece has had more views than I have had hot dinners! Nice tribute to a lovely writer, only wish I knew who this is. Did I know her?
It is a lovely, melancholy flavoured write about seeing someone for their beauty and worth. Must be my favourite of your works.

Posted 7 Years Ago


 wordman

7 Years Ago

thank you john,she is at hello poetry,somebody ran her off,not sure if you knew her
I love the last couple of lines! "soft as silk, sweet as snow, she looks like she just stepped out of Vogue". Wow! She must have really inspired you... And how fleeting is the beauty of a woman... yet you've immortalized what hers meant to you in this tribute.

Posted 7 Years Ago


 wordman

7 Years Ago

thank you nadia,she was and still is a friend,
This piece makes me want to meet the illusive woman.

Posted 7 Years Ago


 wordman

7 Years Ago

well she is real,she left w/c over a want to be troll
thank you !
Chris A Jones

7 Years Ago

Sorry to hear that. Guess that's why you titled it illusive.
 wordman

7 Years Ago

yeap ,in stead of ellusive
Ah...wonderful dedication...lovely flow...holds a vibrant energy...

Posted 8 Years Ago


 wordman

8 Years Ago

thank you !
a beautiful ode...
... as smoothly written as her footsteps across the dunes of your synapses
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thank you for sharing
~ k

Posted 8 Years Ago


 wordman

8 Years Ago

thank you for the visit !

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Added on August 21, 2015
Last Updated on August 14, 2017

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wordman

hixson, TN



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just ask, golden glove boxer years ago,us army veteran ,a contractor is how i make my living, i am an amateur writer.. been here since june of 2013,couldn`t write then,still can`t.but who cares i .. more..

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