Last Train to Georgia

Last train to Georgia

do i board

or stay here with you

i need someone to tell me what to do

I don`t know any more

i really don`t know how i feel

was it ever love

was it ever real

I am confused

in my own mind

you have run me down so much

i think i`m blind

I really don`t know

who i am anymore

i`m afraid to make a decision

i`m really not sure

Would it really be me

it seems i was a different person years ago

but it`s been so long

i really don`t know

If i board

or if i stay

would it be the right decision

if i made it today

How much longer can i wait

the train is boarding at the gate

not sure who i am anymore

it may already be to late...

Reviews

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Its always a gamble to choose something.
Whatever we decide, like a road not taken, it will always haunt us with its 'what ifs'.
A dilemma we all face.
Very relatable. Great write.

[wordman]

thank you jyoti,appreciate your visit !

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

You are welcome.

[JayceeC]

I like your interpretation of this classic. It's a gamble leaving one for another, and only time will tell if the choice was a good one...and perhaps you would still think about the other option. What ifs are very powerful and show up happy or sad. Ours an equal opportunity invader of thoughts.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit,after i post them i go back and read them,it usually goes a lot deeper than i first imagined..

[JayceeC]

Lol I sometimes feel like that..Our someone reviews and sees something I totally missed, but is a valid response.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. A turning point in a relationship or traveling adversities. An excellent one wordman and workman. Bravo......:).......

[wordman]

thank you sammi .

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. ......:).........

[Bo Lanier]

nicely written - good descriptions. love the video too!

[wordman]

thank you very much mr bo

[Gee]

Mmmm,to go or not to go,Love is oh so complicated,well,it can be.Loved the rhyme and flow.Good work WM

[wordman]

thank you gee,

[Insight "MH"]

Sometime you must choose the hardest decision of all, which is sacrifice, but for what? is it worth it? you, only you, who knows.

Thank you for this fine piece of write.

Insight.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit !

[Insight "MH"]

You are welcome .

[Brenda Garacci]

This is a very interesting poem, Wordman. Sometimes it's hard to figure out which is the best path to take in life, the spontaneous or reflective one.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Brenda Garacci]

Thank you for yours as well. It's my first day on this site, and you were my first reviewer. I have many more poems and original designs to submit but will do a few at a time in the days to come. Cool that you put videos with yours. Have a good evening! Brenda

[wordman]

welcome to writers cafe,might as well be your first friend too,

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Beautiful as always

and romantic.


Thank you for sharing.


God bless

[wordman]

thank you !

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're welcome.

[Urja Gokani]

wow amazingly written i liked the way you write poems good :)

[wordman]

thank you cherry blossom,appreciate your visit .

[Coyote Poetry]

Great song and amazing poetry. I like the train rides. I travel by train throughout Europe. Train and sadness does fall together. I like the want and the feel of regret. It is too late. Thank you my friend for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[wordman]

thank you for the visit john,always appreciated

[Coyote Poetry]

My pleasure and you are welcome.