Almost like a song

I lie here every night,

wishing , i could hold you tight;

as your beauty echoes softly through my mind,

as my heart,you gently entwine.

 

I feel your presence by my side,

as you gently unfold in my mind;

as we make love,i feel your soft skin,

as it caresses mine.

 

It was almost like a song,

the orchestra gently playing ;

as our bodies dance along,

then i awake, with tears in my eyes.

 

When i roll over to hold you,

i realize,it was just a dream;

as you,

lay gentle on my mind...

,

Author's Note

2 nd place in any poetry contest

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Another sad tale of waking up after letting her into your dreams WM.

I see our 'friend' is back 'tagging' you with a vengeance. I have flagged many of his comments on your pages today. These comments are racist as well as disgusting and they must break your laws in the USA?

[wordman]

morning john,thanks reading all my fan mail from the idiot

[Perkele.7885]

I thought the poem had nice sentimentality throughout! good work, wordman!

[wordman]

thanks raj,reading my tk little fan mail all 221