Almost like a song

I lie here every night,

wishing , i could hold you tight;

as your beauty echoes softly through my mind,

as my heart,you gently entwine.

 

I feel your presence by my side,

as you gently unfold in my mind;

as we make love,i feel your soft skin,

as it caresses mine.

 

It was almost like a song,

the orchestra gently playing ;

as our bodies dance along,

then i awake, with tears in my eyes.

 

When i roll over to hold you,

i realize,it was just a dream;

as you,

lay gentle on my mind...

,

Author's Note

2 nd place in any poetry contest

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

Truly lovely, Ron, Gentle and passionate.

[wordman]

thank you pryde

[Willard Wells]

Beautiful work. Love the flow of the entire piece. Thank you for sharing.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit willard,a pleasure

[Shah Sabia]

Sucha beautiful piece, truly magical.
The ending adds to the charm :)
Well done, Wordman.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Shah Sabia]

Pleasure was all mine :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Well, this is lovely :) and if you ask me, the ending added a little more to it. 100 points :)

[wordman]

after i oosted it and added the music i really liked it,thank you for reading

[Dani The Unreviewed]

You're welcome :)

[zephyr]

A beautiful and lovely write, Wordman.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[MOON]

Lyrical write heartfelt emotion.

[wordman]

thank you moon for the visit

[SCRIBBLER]

It has an emotive feel touching the strings of peoples hearts.
'It was almost like a song
the orchestra gently playing
as our bodies dance along
then i awake with tears in my eyes'
This phrase would have to be my favourite. Great Write!!!

[wordman]

thank you scribbler

[E G TEN]

Spoken like a true champ Word, like a song or an orchestra
It has a nice sentimental feel to it. Great Write! :-)

[wordman]

thank you for stopping by

[stars are far]

wow that was very beautiful and well writtne..i liked the last stanza howyou concluded it i felt like somthing touched me inside.. that was very bautiful .. well done :)

[wordman]

you are sweet thank you for the visit

[Sandy Miller]

I selected this to review because of the title and I was not disappointed. You took me back on a journey to the past where life was wonderful. I love your wording in this and it was perfect. I will be reading more as the days go by. Well done.

Best Wishes
Sandy

[wordman]

thank you very much sandy,my door is always open and the coffee is hot