Almost like a song

I lie here every night,

wishing , i could hold you tight;

as your beauty echoes softly through my mind,

as my heart,you gently entwine.

 

I feel your presence by my side,

as you gently unfold in my mind;

as we make love,i feel your soft skin,

as it caresses mine.

 

It was almost like a song,

the orchestra gently playing ;

as our bodies dance along,

then i awake, with tears in my eyes.

 

When i roll over to hold you,

i realize,it was just a dream;

as you,

lay gentle on my mind...

,

Author's Note

2 nd place in any poetry contest

Reviews

[Hiroshi Masters]

Beautiful poem! Really loved it! Its almost like a song

. Seriously lyrically

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Celie Rose]

I enjoyed reading your poem. It flowed nicely and the song by Ronnie Milsap adds a genuine touch.

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[gabrielle]

We may keep on playing a beautiful song but eventually we must learn to accept that nothing lasts forever.What a bittersweet piece.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit !

[Miss Sharon]

Coming back for a re-read of this beautiful write Ron! (Time to grace the page again my friend.) ~SP

[wordman]

thank you sharon,always a pleasure to see you !

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Beautiful piece but a sad end.
Your words were forming a song but almost.
Liked it!

[wordman]

life isn`t always a bed of roses,thank you

[andrew mitchell]

Beautiful work produced wordman

[wordman]

thank you andrew

[W R Stowe]

Guess this is the one to burst your bubble amazing how dreams can seem so real nice write Word

Bill

[wordman]

thank you mr stowe

[W R Stowe]

you're very welcome

[Arjun Singh]

It has got a nice tune and ring to it
Definitely a well defined and creative write...
:)

[wordman]

thank you very much

[Jamestown]

Well written and delivered!
Great flow throughout and definitely touching:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[wordman]

thank you for stopping by