Almost like a song

I lie here every night,

wishing , i could hold you tight;

as your beauty echoes softly through my mind,

as my heart,you gently entwine.

 

I feel your presence by my side,

as you gently unfold in my mind;

as we make love,i feel your soft skin,

as it caresses mine.

 

It was almost like a song,

the orchestra gently playing ;

as our bodies dance along,

then i awake, with tears in my eyes.

 

When i roll over to hold you,

i realize,it was just a dream;

as you,

lay gentle on my mind...

,

Author's Note

2 nd place in any poetry contest

Reviews

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!
sir this is so beautiful..... romantic and sweet.. ...
absolutely loved it!!!
:)

[wordman]

i appreciate your visit my friend

[David Scott]

I like how the last line settles the poem. A very nice thought to have your lover wholly draped across one's mind.
Enjoyed the poetry. Interesting bio!

[wordman]

i appreciate your visit !

[AaronFreitas]

I may have to steal these words my friend... this is such a well thought out and perfect write. One of my fav's by you buddy! Great work

[wordman]

help your self ! thank you for the visit

[Insight "MH"]

These sweet and tender emotions. The poem provoked every gentle emotion in me. Thank you for sharing this fine piece.

Insight.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit,i appreciate it ~

[Insight "MH"]

You are welcome.

[RomaJ]

I like the soft tones of your poem. It's a whisper of melodies I've heard before. That stays in your heart and mind, long after we've awaken. Love and music intertwines. It moves you.
Very moving and touching poem.

[wordman]

thank you very much,glad to see you !

[davescotland]

Each time I read over this I kept matching it to different tunes in my head. nice work

[wordman]

thank you for the visit !

[JMKane117]

Your words are gentle and powerful. But that shouldn't be a surprise considering your name is Wordman. I really like the last stanza. It resonates well. Thanks for sharing!

[wordman]

thank you for the visit !