Almost like a song

I lie here every night,

wishing , i could hold you tight;

as your beauty echoes softly through my mind,

as my heart,you gently entwine.

 

I feel your presence by my side,

as you gently unfold in my mind;

as we make love,i feel your soft skin,

as it caresses mine.

 

It was almost like a song,

the orchestra gently playing ;

as our bodies dance along,

then i awake, with tears in my eyes.

 

When i roll over to hold you,

i realize,it was just a dream;

as you,

lay gentle on my mind...

,

Author's Note

2 nd place in any poetry contest

Reviews

[wordman]

free form ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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Hello! Thank You for posting your poem on POESIA group. Your poem will be published on our website soon. Hope you continue to contribute with more poems in future :)

[wordman]

thank you and i will

[Sami Khalil]

A romantic song gently playing and caressing. To wake up is to realize the dream past. Nicely expressed dear Wordman.

[Sami Khalil]

"you gently caress my mind
as we make love i feel your soft skin"

[Sami Khalil]

"your beauty echoes softly
through my mind as my heart"

[wordman]

thank you sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome

[Rye]

This is so wonderful I like the part of "as you lay gentle on my mind" makes me think of that song. I love music sorry about that. I guess that is why I love poetic writes. Awesome write!

[wordman]

don`t usually send r/r`s but this is one of my favorites,,thank you

[Rye]

no problem, I am wanting read request, sometimes it gives me inspiration, I love reading poems. No problem

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

ah love it
reminds me of a james taylor song
in my mind I'm going to Carolina
cant you just feel the sunshine
love your work

[wordman]

love your reviews,thank you

[Ayvid N]

as you lay gentle
on my mind...

A vivid and beautiful but alas wishful dream. How deeply felt the void!

[wordman]

thank you very much

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Very nice. Sweet dreaming . Lovely poem with seducive words. Just wonderful mood.

[wordman]

thesong makes the poem sound even better,thank you

[Diamond]

Your writings have a certain softness within them though they talk about lack and sadness. Enjoyed reading it big time. Thank you for sharing.

[wordman]

like my life i guess,sad and lacking,thank you