Simple rhythm, straightforward message. I am floored to by your ability to be compact. If you extended these out a bit, these could be full-fledged songs.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
i think i,m happy when i hit the fourth stanza,like the bell rang,thank you again
Ah! I, too, have 'fallen in love' from words, 'fallen in love' online. It can be fun for a while. It's not love; it's all fake, and sometimes it turns you upside down and throws you hard against a wall. You'll get some good poems out of it, that's about all.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
lord,i was thinking marriage,thank you for the visit
Love is many things and different to many people and my love for my wife developed over written messages to each other so the answer is yes you can feel love for someone you never met yet personally my wife fell in love through my poetry I think good job anyway word man
thank you bill,hope you get together with her soon
9 Years Ago
So do I brother she has been emotional during Skype sessions crying and it tears me up cause I can't.. read moreSo do I brother she has been emotional during Skype sessions crying and it tears me up cause I can't be there to comfort her appreciate prayers bro
just ask, golden glove boxer years ago,us army veteran ,a contractor is how i make my living,
i am an amateur writer.. been here since june of 2013,couldn`t write then,still can`t.but who cares
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