This is the beauty of poetry. The connections we make with words. Hearts touching hearts. Sharing thoughts and the emotions it evokes. Nicely penned Ron.
This is a beautifully simple way to describe how we have loving relationships with people we've never even met or touched or kissed, such is the power of words, that we are moved by virtual connections even more than the mundane daily grind of knowing real people on the physical plane. I love the beginning, as it expresses our reluctance to call it "love" when we are so moved by someone we've never met, but who has played a strong role in our lives thru words. I really love this.
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8 Years Ago
i guess it`s just a feeling of comfort with the person ! love and feelings should not be judged in t.. read morei guess it`s just a feeling of comfort with the person ! love and feelings should not be judged in the same way
What to say about this so lovely poem... I have really no words to express my opinion. It directly says somethings about my feelings and emotions. It seems to me, maybe God revealed you to compose it for me. I love it so much. It did not only touched my heart but stolen too. great works. I want more and more such poems.... :-) Thanks for sharing.
A poem about a ghost woman whom you have magically fell in love with. I am writing a book about this, how a man fails in physical love but strives in spiritual love. I like this poem alot and I haven't ran into many like this one. Thanks for writing it. And I read your profile. Thank you for serving and about the who's who, very impressed! And what is this about music? You write music?
Ron, I enjoyed your poem on a level that that I set aside for when I want to toss things around in my head a bit. To my way of thinking, as people, we toss the word love and other such superlatives around much too freely, until these words reach a point where they are no longer 'special' in the way that they were meant to be used when they were first used in the English lexicon.
I think that in your poem, you find and establish a deep connection for the person that you are writing about! Could a love develop from this connection later on if the connection were to continue and take root? I have no doubt that this could be possible!
just ask, golden glove boxer years ago,us army veteran ,a contractor is how i make my living,
i am an amateur writer.. been here since june of 2013,couldn`t write then,still can`t.but who cares
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