My Rose

My love

she is a river

that leads

to my soul

My life

my salvation

the only woman

that I want to hold

But my rose

she went away

one frosty morning

just at the break of day

Now

my rose

she

sleeps in my soul...

Author's Note

This write was inspired by jc

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[andrew mitchell]

A love lost but what a write is born!

[wordman]

thank you andrew,

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A commendable piece of poetry, touching the heart with sadness.

[wordman]

thank you autumn,i appreciate your visit

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No offense by the way.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Such a sad and brutal thing to lose ones love but still feel that thorn, that pang of love.

[wordman]

them pangs live forever john,thank you for the review cheers my friend

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[Perkele.7885]

Another lost love poem, Ron! My kind of write! Good Job.

[wordman]

you my kind a man raj,i appreciate your review.having some jim beam and listening to stevie ray vaughn on you tube

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Yeah and you whoever you are a a coward. You hide behind multiple identities and spend your life abusing people. You are sad, deranged and dangerous. You should be treated for your mental disorder.

[h d e rushin]

It's funny wordman how love (the fundament principle) and soul (the eternal principle) are not
mutually exclusive. And, although they reside so beautifully together in love poems, the human
heart makes no literal separation. You write so beautifully.

dana

[wordman]

you are too kind,but don`t stop lol

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I love this, Ron :) has great flow and is beautifully written

[wordman]

thank you lynn,i need to edit but i havent yet

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[jeannemarie coulter]

very well penned...thank you...sorry about being so late to reply...i worked in my yard and got way too hot...heat stroke to hospital # 18 in my long life...i really need to remember this pale redhead flesh can not take the heat...home now under the ac which feels good but also i think the use of ac so much over the years has weakened our species making us way more susceptible to allergies and such, any thought on that subject...

ps...my daughter desiree is making me stay down so i am listening to tony joe white, a fav of mine ( well, how can you beat a song like "they caught the devil and put him in jail in eudora arkansaw") and hand sewing some summer cool dresses and blingging the front to sell along with my ceramics this summer at craft fairs...have a great day...

[wordman]

better take care of your self,i`ve been having strange dizzy and weak feelings today,it comes from my heart and getting mad don`t help working on the other two

[jeannemarie coulter]

may the force be with you, not against you...lol...take care...

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[Adam Adams]

The poetry seems to be written with an ink of FAITH. You've put your real nice emotions/feelings in this poetry... to make it full of bliss. Nice work!

[wordman]

i appreciate your review,

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