My Rose

My love

she is a river

that leads

to my soul

My life

my salvation

the only woman

that I want to hold

But my rose

she went away

one frosty morning

just at the break of day

Now

my rose

she

sleeps in my soul...

Author's Note

This write was inspired by jc

Reviews

[Cherry Pepperweb]

JC is a very lucky person to have inspired this.
(JC of the Garvey tales??)
This is classic love poetry and beautifully penned.

[wordman]

thank you for the review,she sent the song and challenged me to put a poem with it,so i tried

[Cherry Pepperweb]

Cool, good work! I'm a big fan of Jc since reading her Garvy poems!

[wordman]

i think she is a great story teller !

[Cherry Pepperweb]

I agree! Love her Garvey character!

[WriterGirl101]

I loved this.. It was very good, and sad.... Loved it

[wordman]

thank you writer girl for the visit

[WriterGirl101]

Welcome. Love reading other peoples writings... :)

[....................]

this opened with a sigh and ended with a pain in the heart... your first stanza is absolutely beautiful, Ron... wish i had written it but glad to be just able to read it... and the image of the rose living within you... pricelessly beautiful

[wordman]

thank you for your kind words my friend

[....................]

my pleasure, Ron...

[sereenaoutloud]

"my love she is a river the leads to my soul"
Wow this so beautiful Ron , what a big heart you have my friend! And the song choice superb..winning combination!!

[wordman]

thank you very much sereena

[sereenaoutloud]

always welcome Ron! :)

[Willard Wells]

Very nice work. It's not every day you can write a piece that brings out a troll like you have done. Very fine work indeed. We can only hope the toll fines a life that will bring them peace within their life. It's truly sad to see the misery in the world to the point that people blindly reach out to hurt others that they really know nothing about. I have not walked in your shoes and will not judge. I feel the same about trolls. Something painful happened in their life to bring them to the point of blindly lashing out at others when their own house I expect is not in order.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit,it is the farther-est thing from me as day and night
it is tk little,he is very sick or demon possessed,either which a bad combination
he wants every one here that doesen`t lay down for him to be dis credited by any means
this is a drop in the bucket,i have deleted over 600 to date

[Willard Wells]

I always like cheap entertainment and he will be high on my list of shows to watch. I had read some notes previously about this action, but had yet to be entertained until today. Thanks for the fun. An so WC really does not give a s**t. Nice.

[wordman]

well actually he deleted the comments,closed one account today and homed in on two ip addresses
read morewell actually he deleted the comments,closed one account today and homed in on two ip addresses
and he has his e mail from john gabriel.he has figured out it is downgrading his site.

[Willard Wells]

I did see that the tk little was no longer here, but as we know that is just for now.

[wordman]

yes and he or she has over 100 fake pages,he deleted 3 today,one being ron parrish lol
charlie is watching my page for the ip addresses,i think he has awoke finally

[Willard Wells]

IP would have been my suggestion, but if he was bored enough and it sounds like he is, he could use a search engine routed through another IP address routed through another country. A pain but easy to do.

[wordman]

not for me,i have no idea,not sure it`s a he

[Willard Wells]

I use "he" only as a place holder.

[Susie Q]

This is an awesome tribute of a love still carried in the soul and a perfect way to decribe it in the words & music from The Rose, sung by a special lady.

[wordman]

thank you so much

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[fattycbreezy52]

Oh a tragic loss but so very touching in the form of a poem.

[wordman]

thank you for reading

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