My Rose

My Rose

A Poem by wordman
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My love

she is a river

that leads

to my soul

My life

my salvation

the only woman

that I want to hold

But my rose

she went away

one frosty morning

just at the break of day

Now

my rose

she

sleeps in my soul...

© 2016 wordman


Author's Note

 wordman
This write was inspired by jc

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JC is a very lucky person to have inspired this.
(JC of the Garvey tales??)
This is classic love poetry and beautifully penned.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Cherry Pepperweb

9 Years Ago

I agree! Love her Garvey character!
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I loved this.. It was very good, and sad.... Loved it

Posted 9 Years Ago


WriterGirl101

9 Years Ago

Welcome. Love reading other peoples writings... :)
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this opened with a sigh and ended with a pain in the heart... your first stanza is absolutely beautiful, Ron... wish i had written it but glad to be just able to read it... and the image of the rose living within you... pricelessly beautiful

Posted 9 Years Ago


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9 Years Ago

my pleasure, Ron...
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"my love she is a river the leads to my soul"
Wow this so beautiful Ron , what a big heart you have my friend! And the song choice superb..winning combination!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


sereenaoutloud

9 Years Ago

always welcome Ron! :)
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Very nice work. It's not every day you can write a piece that brings out a troll like you have done. Very fine work indeed. We can only hope the toll fines a life that will bring them peace within their life. It's truly sad to see the misery in the world to the point that people blindly reach out to hurt others that they really know nothing about. I have not walked in your shoes and will not judge. I feel the same about trolls. Something painful happened in their life to bring them to the point of blindly lashing out at others when their own house I expect is not in order.

Posted 9 Years Ago


 wordman

9 Years Ago

not for me,i have no idea,not sure it`s a he
Willard Wells

9 Years Ago

I use "he" only as a place holder.
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This is an awesome tribute of a love still carried in the soul and a perfect way to decribe it in the words & music from The Rose, sung by a special lady.

Posted 9 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

9 Years Ago

Please flag these abusive messages to the moderators.
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Oh a tragic loss but so very touching in the form of a poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Added on June 26, 2015
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