My Rose

My love

she is a river

that leads

to my soul

My life

my salvation

the only woman

that I want to hold

But my rose

she went away

one frosty morning

just at the break of day

Now

my rose

she

sleeps in my soul...

Author's Note

This write was inspired by jc

Reviews

[SZHZIA]

beautiful... it immensely inspired me, wordman. Nice job.. Thanks for sharing... :-)


Best
Szhzia

[wordman]

if i can inspire someone,then it inspires me

[SZHZIA]

Thanks you

[Miss Sharon]

Be still my beating heart! I love this one Ron. ~SP

[wordman]

thank you sharon !

[Ruth]

Bittersweet...tangible and heartfelt...most beautiful in its simple complexity :)

[wordman]

thank you for the visit ! simple to me is more profound and touching

[Workvio]

Beautifully bittersweet as life so often is ...

[wordman]

thank you marvin

[Southern_Writes]

Really enjoyed this! It almost is like the song of a widow.

[wordman]

thank you,that`s pretty much what it is!

[silverwritinggoddess]

Sweet and sad! Very poignant! Definitely written from deep within. Beautiful job!

[wordman]

lol, i am a deep person,thank you for the visit jennifer

[Monday Parker]

I really like that-

My love
she is a river
that leads
to my soul


Awesome.... But so sad.

[wordman]

thank you very much!

[Celie Rose]

Beautiful poem. Bette Midler brings it on home!

[wordman]

thank you !

[Rose Olstrom]

the only words that stuck with me in this poem were "sleeps in my soul". although they really did make me think. good work

[wordman]

and thank you rose

[Sari Segale]

Beautiful, sensitive words , love this poem ,thanks for sharing

[wordman]

thank you for the visit