Sweet Dreams { a duet with Micky }

Last night in my dreams

we made love,for the first time

it was special

not like any one before

Your sweet lips on mine

the feel of your soft skin

your gentle touch

as your body slides closer in time

Our bodies so close I feel your heart racing

playing and touching slowly caressing

I hear your soft moans in my ear

I whisper for you to trust me

Feeling your hand searching I move my

lips down to your neck

slowly moving my hands

slowly...

Reviews

[Perkele.7885]

Careful, tame poem of a first time love making experience

[wordman]

always careful,thanks

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A sensual and romantic portrayal of a first sexual encounter WM.
Two small observations:
not like anyone before and
There are two 'mine' used in the second stanza?

[wordman]

thank you john

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MMM how soft, dreamy, and romantic :) beautiful poetry

[wordman]

i`m glad you stopped by,thanks

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!
outstanding...........
sensual beautiful tease.........
absolutely loved it!!!
:)

[wordman]

thank you for the review my friend

[micky]

It was really fun to write with you word man :) thanks for the opportunity

[wordman]

it was my pleasure micky

[sereenaoutloud]

a very sensual but beautiful collab. IT really reads like once voice, well done you 2!!

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[micky]

Thanks so much Sereena