Sweet Dreams { a duet with Micky }

Last night in my dreams

we made love,for the first time

it was special

not like any one before

Your sweet lips on mine

the feel of your soft skin

your gentle touch

as your body slides closer in time

Our bodies so close I feel your heart racing

playing and touching slowly caressing

I hear your soft moans in my ear

I whisper for you to trust me

Feeling your hand searching I move my

lips down to your neck

slowly moving my hands

slowly...

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Good song and very good poetry. A great job with the team effort. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[wordman]

thank you john

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[andrew mitchell]

You guys did a great write on a rather romantic setting of love and desire!

[wordman]

thank you andrew

[silent poet]

This was simply beautiful, very sweet piece from the both of you. You've captured so much ..great work!

[wordman]

thank you camille

[silent poet]

Very welcome wordman 😊

[Mitali Shah]

Filled with complete romance. Loved it Wordman

[wordman]

you are kind,thanks

[Mitali Shah]

your welcome dear

[Robert]

Boy this is rated X, Haha. Well done you two you wrote this piece well together.

[wordman]

thank you robert

[KWP]

that's my kinda dream .. :) hopefully it permitted a happy ending .. ;)

[wordman]

thank you kwp

[KWP]

oh wow ... lovely

[jeannemarie coulter]

i enjoyed this one...the song is perfect with it...the vision created is smooth and clear...i think the last line in the second stanza would read more easily aloud if you cut the words "to mine"...i love the slow drift in the end...exquisite...

[wordman]

thank you for your review