You Knew

If ever

you see my face,

in the spring,

or in the fall;

 during a gentle rain

when a flower blooms,

or a tree bursts forth its fruit,

think of me:

Remember,

that I loved you,

even though

I never told you.

But you knew,

you could feel my love,

in the falling dew

of the morning sun.

you knew.

You gave me peace,

you touched my soul,

you knew,

that I loved you so ...

Reviews

[W R Stowe]

Very moving poem of love we know when we're loved nice piece word

Bill

[wordman]

thank you bill

[W R Stowe]

you're welcome word

Bill

[Richard🖌]

Beautiful rendering, My Friend, in tenderness and affection that would melt even the most frigid heart, employing creative language to virtually tugs at one's heartstrings softly.
The tune is perfect to set the mood for this excellent piece, and the emotion flowing all through entwines with those your verses build in the reader's.
The way you blended human and nature dimensions, sensations, and textures lends depth in a way that powers such a moment we can't help but be involved … remarkable, your poetical skills.
Fine tuning: V2;L3 (make "its" without the apostrophe), V4;L1 (omit the quote mark), check for needed commas,

Obviously, after reading this one several times and giving it such attention, you have to conclude that I sincerely enjoyed it … thank you for the pleasure, Dear Poet! ⁓ Richard

[wordman]

thank you very much,don`t use commas in poems unless i have to

[Richard🖌]

Seeing as how you used commas properly in other parts, I naturally assumed you'd want to throughout and simply missed the spots, but thanks for clearing that up for me … LOL!
Regardless, I've read through several of your excellent pieces, and look forward to reviewing them for you.

[SyberRose]

during a gentle rain

when a flower blooms,

or a tree bursts forth it`s fruit

think of me:


Beautiful and romantic words...Rose

[wordman]

thank you rose,i appreciate you

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Ron, I love this song and the poem is beautiful :)

[wordman]

thank you lynn,who don`t like this song

[Jamestown]

Well done my friend!
Very sweet sentiment and great flow:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[wordman]

thank you james

[sereenaoutloud]

This is beautiful and so romantic and a little sad...a love lost :(
Great write though!!

[wordman]

thank you for the visit