Frozen

 

 

When we first met

your heart was frozen

but we felt a spark

 

Your heart started to melt and thaw

our love started to bloom

as a beautiful spring day

as the ice melted away

 

You reached out to me

like a vine in bloom

the warmth of my heart

melted your soul

 

As I nurtured you

our passion started to grow

the love melted your heart

as we became one with nature

 

I touched you,like the sun

touches a flowering bud

I touched your soul

and our love grew like a flowering rose...

Reviews

[jeannemarie coulter]

quite lovely and inspiring...a fine penning much enjoyed

[wordman]

thank you for the visit,

[Robert]

What a heart felt piece you have written. Those are the best poem I believe and not too long. Glad I read this.

[wordman]

thank you robert,i hate long poems too

[sereenaoutloud]

This is beautiful..warmed my heart to read it!
Lovely write Ron
Oh and love the song.. another one i grew up hearing lol :)

[wordman]

thank you sereena , i like old john denver

[JayceeC]

Word you have some great images intertwined in this write. You fill out your blooming love watered and nurtured by all that ice melting.

[wordman]

i told that old girl she couldn`t resist me jc thank you

[fattycbreezy52]

Woww...anything with frozen is likely to catch my attention. Awesome movie it was and so is this poem of yours.
Such simple words but of great significance . It's about how the love blooms and it's transience .From the frozen to the blooming and from mature to immature stage.
you kind of write like John Donne and other metaphysicals.
Such a beautiful poem! :)

[fattycbreezy52]

From immature to mature stage*

[wordman]

you are too sweet,but i lavish in it lol thank you

[Valentine]

I love the wording in the last stanza. Very sweet poem. Valentine

[wordman]

thank you kathie for taking the time

[Valentine]

No problem, I enjoy reading your work. Especially when your soft side shows through. Kathie

[wordman]

thank you,i don`t have a soft side

[Valentine]

Every one does! Men just do not want to admit it. Kathie

[Valentine]

Read 4 or 5...where is the new one? Kathie

[wordman]

i will post it today

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love the image of melting hearts into one... and an apt piece for Spring :)

[wordman]

thank you for the review

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This has some yummy views like "you reached out to me like a vine in bloom" and "I touched you like the sun touches a flowering bud". I loved those lines. The whole poem was lovely, Ron :)

[wordman]

well lynn you kinda inspired the write when you suggested i write with more natue
so this one is on you,thanks

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I'm honored, Ron :)