Four Seasons of Love

Your love

is like the spring

as we move together

in a slow flame

And as our emotions arise

it`s like the summers heat

your love so soft,so sweet

you make me complete

And as we cool down from the loves heat 

the fall breeze blowing through your brown hair

as we lie together in the bliss of the fall

with all its beautiful colors

Then comes the winters wind

as we snuggle in our feather bed

with a warm fire glowing in the dark

you are my life,you are my girl...

Reviews

[Valentine]

Ah hah....so you found some inspiration on site....steamy. Valentine

[wordman]

yeah,old lynn paid me to say that,thank you

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Old?!...blinks. you telling stories too and I caught you hahahaha

[wordman]

it was a type o

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typo...uhuh. smirks at you

[wordman]

i meant young and sweet lynn!

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Awww Ron, that's so sweet :) I am honored to have inspired you to right this lovely poem

[wordman]

thank you lynn,but i think it`s a little cheesy
thinking about deleting

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I'm sorry you're not happy with it :( I really am honored to have inspired you to write it though

[silent poet]

And a very lucky girl she is! Nicely done.. I can't find the words, my apologies but I know what I'm trying to say.. A man who can dig inside and pull within himself is extremely appealing.. you do well with getting it all out, good job here

[wordman]

thank you,this one is a little cheesy i think

[silent poet]

I think It's natural.. simple and real.. :)

[Jamestown]

Well penned!
Sweet sentiment and great flow,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[wordman]

thank you for taking the time to read