Four Seasons of Love

Four Seasons of Love

A Poem by wordman
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Your love

is like the spring

as we move together

in a slow flame


And as our emotions arise

it`s like the summers heat

your love so soft,so sweet

you make me complete


And as we cool down from the loves heat 

the fall breeze blowing through your brown hair

as we lie together in the bliss of the fall

with all its beautiful colors


Then comes the winters wind

as we snuggle in our feather bed

with a warm fire glowing in the dark

you are my life,you are my girl...

© 2016 wordman


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I can't believe you have John Denver on here, I love John Denver, but I didn't know people still remembered his music. you are a romance writer, and love just flows from your soul in visions of lovliness
desire, devotion. You have a very lucky wife.

Posted 9 Years Ago


 wordman

9 Years Ago

if you like romance poems then look at page 3 love story
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A love for all seasons, a love for eternity. Beautifully sweet and romantic Ron.

:) Julie

Posted 9 Years Ago


 wordman

9 Years Ago

thank you julie
A nice declaration of love and romantic devotion Wordman. A couple of observations:
a) This free verse yet in stanza two there are three random lines that rhyme and
b) In stanzas two and three you end with 'heat' and it would read better with an alternative phrase such as 'And as we cool down from loves volcano'
Not that it matters as it is a very readable piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago


 wordman

9 Years Ago

thank you john
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awesome Sir......
seems like these seasons were made to experience shades of love.......
beautiful poem....
i loved it!!!
:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


 wordman

9 Years Ago

i appreciate your visit,thanks
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Love is love be it any season... this is so romantic and sentimental. Plus liked the song a lot :)
Thanks for sharing it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


 wordman

9 Years Ago

thank you nazia for the visit,
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I see the love boy from inside you is all coming out n ready to set a blazing fire for the girl in your life....
Great!

Posted 9 Years Ago


 wordman

9 Years Ago

thank you skyfall
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I love this so romantic and i love this song. My mum used to sing it a lot when i was younger ...
So beautiful all the seasons of love!!
You are too sweet Ron :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valentine

9 Years Ago

That is because you are one! Brat it is>>>Kathie
 wordman

9 Years Ago

you know i`m sweet kathie
Valentine

9 Years Ago

Laughing ........

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Added on June 1, 2015
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