Four Seasons of Love

Your love

is like the spring

as we move together

in a slow flame

And as our emotions arise

it`s like the summers heat

your love so soft,so sweet

you make me complete

And as we cool down from the loves heat 

the fall breeze blowing through your brown hair

as we lie together in the bliss of the fall

with all its beautiful colors

Then comes the winters wind

as we snuggle in our feather bed

with a warm fire glowing in the dark

you are my life,you are my girl...

Reviews

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

This poem gently strings the seasons together with true love and soft romantic undertones. Listening to the accompanying song in the background while reading this piece is sheer delight. Thank you for sharing your talent.

[wordman]

thank you for the review,i wish i was talented,you are a great wruter
you will like it here,when you look around we have a lot of things to do.you will have many friends and reviews,lord i have poems here with 1200 visits and so will you

[Pritika]

Your words beautifully support the lovely theme of your poem.

[wordman]

thank you for your visit

[ANTO]

I was interested to see how you would handle Winter in this one without making it seem as relations going 'cold' but I think you did it very well - externalising the cold, whereas the the other seasons were internalised/personalised. That gave you opportunity to conjure a really sweet ending.
Good one WM