Am i that easy to forget

Was i that easy to forget

it seems you are doing fine

they say a broken heart

will mend in time

 

But time has stood still

since you said goodbye

you broke my heart

you made me cry

 

They say men don`t cry

but honey that`s not true

i have cried a lot of tears

over you

 

I guess

what hurts the most

is you didn`t need me

you didn`t need me at all...

Reviews

[Mayank Sharma]

they say a broken heart

will mend in time



But time has stood still

since you said goodbye

LOVED THIS LINES

[wordman]

an old ray charles song re worked a couple lines,thank you

[Mayank Sharma]

Oh,still a nice work.

[Richard🖌]

Ahhh, you've the makings of a great country song in this tenderly poignant little tearjerker, Ron.

I especially enjoy the smooth rhythm and flow, despite the uneven line counts … it takes an artist's deft skills to do this, and not many can pull it off, but you seem to have a real knack for it.

I'm genuinely enjoying your poems, My Friend, in a huge way … thanks for sharing You!! ⁓ Richard

[wordman]

thank you richard,don`t have a clue about line counts

[Richard🖌]

Yes, I can see … LOL!
But, when it's this good, who cares?