You can't 'unlove' people, definitely can't forget them. No matter how many days pass, there will always be a faint memory of them, somewhete etched...deep inside your mind.
Wonderfully expressed.
There are some really deep lines in this. My favorites are "they say a broken heart / will mend in time / But time has stood still / since you said goodbye" and the part about men not being "supposed" to cry, but doing so. Very tender emotion in such a simple piece. Nice work!
I like the simplicity of expression here, relatable & straightforward. I think it often feels this way from afar. From our insecure viewpoint, it seems the "ex" is doing fine, moving on, not missing us. But there's probably equal missing & longing on both sides. Or sometimes a person slams the door shut overly quickly & harshly to smash any possibility of missing & longing . . . so we interpret this as in your message here. I love Vince Gill's singing, guitar playing, & his entire body of work.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
not much of a country music fan,but i love vince,and i appreciate your comment
A gd write
Mst ppl get carried away wen writing sch poems, bt u managd to stick to ur original theme, clearly xprsd urself, nd kep it entertaing all d while....
Enjoyd it.... :)
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i am an amateur writer.. been here since june of 2013,couldn`t write then,still can`t.but who cares
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