A Poem for Jackie

There's a place in heaven

only children can go

Gods most beautiful garden

where innocent love will always flow

And the lord has a special garden

in that place ,and he needed a

special rose to fill that space

he came here on earth to find that rose,

and it was your Jackie that he chose

and momma god loves you too

but this you already knew ,and

it was your special flower that he chose

but tonight she sleeps with angels

by her side,and even though your,

heart is broken he sends his love

and it comes unspoken

but one day your season

will come to an end

and it will be your Jackie

that will lead you in ...

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Such a sad piece. None of us wants to loose a child and when it happens the sadness is there forever until our own demise.

[wordman]

thank you john,it is unspeakable

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I hope I never am in that position WM and am sorry it happened in your family.

[wordman]

no it didn`t ,thank god another poetry site,another mother

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Glad to hear that at least

[Esther Kirsten]

"But one day your season will come to an end and it will be your Jackie that will lead you in..." This brought tears to my eyes as there is also a child who will lead me in who is 'sleeping with the angels' right now. This is a beautiful write, blessings friend.

[wordman]

thank you for the review,and i am sorry for your loss

[Esther Kirsten]

Thank you Wordman, God gives us grace, always

[Marie]

Jackie must be in a very special place that God intended just for children.

[wordman]

I`m sure she is marie,and thank you for the visit

[sereenaoutloud]

Hi wordman..ok this brought tears to my eyes...how dare you make me cry...lol
This hit too close to home for me...you wrote it beautifully leaving a loving thought that one day mother and child will be reunited! So hard to convey this loss but you worded this perfectly!!
A fantastic write.

[wordman]

thank you sereena for reading,sorry if it brought memories
made me cry to write it

[sereenaoutloud]

:(( double sad face.
You did a superb job and the heart behind it shined through!! thank you for sharing this one!!

[wordman]

thank you,my pleasure

[Angie G]

Beautiful, touching and inspiring. God gifted you the magic of words to touch other souls. Thank you.

[wordman]

you almost made me cry,thank you and good to see you

[Angie G]

Really great to see you as well!

[wordman]

I am blushing

[Angie G]

As you should!! But that's a good thing. Your passion while creating wonderful masterpieces inspire and touch me. Never let that passion die.

[wordman]

I was born with it,i will die with it

[Jamestown]

This is a terrific write friend!
Definitely pulled at the heart stings,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[wordman]

thank you james,havent been on much last few days

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My brothers and I sang "Where the Roses Never Fade" at my father's funeral a few months back and your piece and accompanying videos brought me back to that tear stained day. A wonderful write, wordman!

[wordman]

thank you for reading,sorry it brought memories

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Even in death memories can be good... thanks for sharing

[Perkele.7885]

A very nice poem, nice indeed. I would do only one little thing different. Replace Jimmy swaggert on Piano!

[wordman]

thank you perkele,poor old jimmy,he can play that piano

[Perkele.7885]

I would rather have cousin jerry lee or cousin Mickey Gilley

[wordman]

but they don`t play this type of music,i will look for an alternative

[Melinda McQueen]

Awwwww what a sweet poem. What love in heaven.

[wordman]

melnda,i appreciate your visit

[Tate Morgan]

The passing of ones child is the saddest thing ever.

[wordman]

it is the worst thing that I could see,thank you for the visit tate

[Tate Morgan]

you are welcome