A Poem for Jackie

A Poem for Jackie

A Poem by wordman
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There's a place in heaven

only children can go

Gods most beautiful garden

where innocent love will always flow


And the lord has a special garden

in that place ,and he needed a

special rose to fill that space

he came here on earth to find that rose,


and it was your Jackie that he chose

and momma god loves you too

but this you already knew ,and

it was your special flower that he chose


but tonight she sleeps with angels

by her side,and even though your,

heart is broken he sends his love

and it comes unspoken


but one day your season

will come to an end

and it will be your Jackie

that will lead you in ...

© 2016 wordman


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Sad and emotive. You touch us deeply. A beautiful poem and tribute. Thank you for sharing.


Posted 9 Years Ago


 wordman

9 Years Ago

thank you for the visit,sami
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

My pleasure.
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I love your description of heaven as a garden. My mother-in-laws favorite hymn was "In the Garden" which I like and with my love of flowers, I love to think of it that way. That is is a garden of souls of beauty, is a lovely image. this a a wonderful write and tribute of His love and comfort.

Posted 9 Years Ago


 wordman

9 Years Ago

thank you jc,i appreciate your review
A fine tribute to Jackie Wordsman.

Posted 9 Years Ago


 wordman

9 Years Ago

thank you,robert
I don't know Jackie but you've written a fine poem here wordman. a tender heart-warming write, though sad. the last stanza, I feel, makes the pain so much more bearable.

Posted 9 Years Ago


 wordman

9 Years Ago

thank you woody
Loved this one. Children are special in the eyes of God. The thought of Jackie leading her mother in one day when the mother's season will come to an end is touching

Posted 9 Years Ago


 wordman

9 Years Ago

thank you my friend,sadly it is true
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