A Poem for Jackie

There's a place in heaven

only children can go

Gods most beautiful garden

where innocent love will always flow

And the lord has a special garden

in that place ,and he needed a

special rose to fill that space

he came here on earth to find that rose,

and it was your Jackie that he chose

and momma god loves you too

but this you already knew ,and

it was your special flower that he chose

but tonight she sleeps with angels

by her side,and even though your,

heart is broken he sends his love

and it comes unspoken

but one day your season

will come to an end

and it will be your Jackie

that will lead you in ...

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Wow! Wow! and Wow! Your poem blows my socks off with the sensitivity & imagination! What an awesome, caring, soothing way to respond to someone experiencing the worst grief imaginable! Most of us are mute, not knowing what to say, or blathering the usual banalities. Your poem is so amazing & special. I'm too blown away to say more (((HUGS)))

[wordman]

thank you for reading ! won honorable mention today in poems about loss

[barleygirl]

Congrats on your win! (To me, honorable mention is a win, becuz there are many competitors!) Good luck on all your writing (((HUGS)))

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

I love the last line Ron....gives hope to those who have lost their love ones....so beautiful!

[wordman]

a life long question i guess,who meets you at the gate