Misty Blue

gold in the one way love contest

It`s been  a long time baby!

you were on my mind

thought I would drop you a line

You know baby!

I`m still in love with you

and on day`s like this honey

I just feel misty blue

Baby it`s been a long time

since I held you tight

and I hope this letter

finds you all right

You know baby that I miss you

and I dream of you from time to time

and on those day`s honey

I have to drop you a line

But then I tear them up

and I throw them away

I wouldn't know where to mail

them to any way....

Reviews

[MsJewel]

I love the sing song flow to this bittersweet little gem Ron. I would love to hear it set to music. Wonderful writing my friend

:) Julie

[wordman]

thank you julie

[sereenaoutloud]

Would make Brilliant song lyrics Wordman.

[wordman]

you help me sing it then

[sereenaoutloud]

lol ...the only singing i do now a days in the car while picking up my kiddies :))

[modtoddinc]

Excellent lyrical piece, I enjoyed it very much. I love music and writing and I will be back for more!

~peace,Todd

[wordman]

thank you todd

[Sami Khalil]

"It`s been a long time baby!
you was(were) on my mind
thought I would drop you a line

You know baby!
I`m still in love with you"

Good title and good wording...I like it a lot...:).........

[wordman]

glad to see you sami,been looking for a write from you

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. I just posted a new one. I think you have a typo. Was should be were ...You are welcome...:)................

[wordman]

not a type o sami it`s called ignorant lol

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha. You are welcome...:)..........................

[Tom]

A fine parody on that 'old' floor filler,' romantic ballad, played at the end of the night in any club, disco-tech anywhere the world over !

And so true...'absence makes the heart grow fonder ' !

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Perkele.7885]

I like straight forward story poems like this from time to time. I do not have to figure them out. I can just enjoy them. There is no foul language. No words that I have never heard before. I can even have milk and cookies and feel normal.

[wordman]

I never write porn,never cuss,and always try to write where every body can read
and understand and thank you for the visit my friend

[Fran Marie]

A very lyrical poem here..however; kind of sad and "misty blue.." good title..

[wordman]

thank you fran

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is full of longing, and reads just like a song (I don't know if that's what you intended or not, haha). Nice job!

[wordman]

I just write,you get to interrupt lol thank`s

[Isabel25]

I liked the title very much. 'Mist' and 'blue' are words i like a lot. But I've always related mist to morning. This just brought out a whole new paradigm. I like the last stanza the best. Who knows, maybe you can talk to her in your mind and she will hear you :D

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[AaronFreitas]

What an awesome piece!!! I definitely hear a deep sexy country voice singing this song :) Good work!

[wordman]

thank you for the visit