Bleed

Stab me slow, watch me bleed

is it my pain that you need

you stabbed me in the back

and then walked away

and here I stand still bleeding today

I don`t know why you hurt me so

I don` know why you turned so cold

you closed all doors,you return my mail

do you enjoy putting me through hell

Do you really believe those lies

you didn`t even ask me,i was surprised

do you really know me,i don`t think you do

if you did you know I`d never be untrue...

Reviews

[AaronFreitas]

That is an awesome write my friend. I really enjoyed it... and obviously a style I am familiar with :) Great work!

[wordman]

thanks but I thought about you when I posted

[AaronFreitas]

Thats awesome I appreciate that brother

[sereenaoutloud]

This is a nice write. You can feel the hurt and frustration of not being believed!

[wordman]

that's cause all en is liars lol

[~]

An intense poem, trying to prove that the speaker really needs to be trusted. Well done wordman. :)

[wordman]

hello my friend I wrote this long ago, just made a few changes and posted it,thank you for reading

[~]

:) you are welcome

[Melinda McQueen]

"I don`t know why you hurt me so

I don` know why you turned so cold

you closed all doors,you return my mail

do you enjoy putting me through hell"

Sorry your heart is/was broken.

[wordman]

thank you Melinda,just a poem

[Sami Khalil]

"I stand still bleeding today

I don`t know why you hurt me so
I don` know why you turned so cold"

This sounded like a sad song. Bleed is a powerful sign of extreme suffering and cuts from this sad relationship. An excellent write...:).....

[wordman]

thank you sammi,wrote it a while back made a few changes and posted it

[Sami Khalil]

OK. You are welcome...:).......................