Bleed

Stab me slow, watch me bleed

is it my pain that you need

you stabbed me in the back

and then walked away

and here I stand still bleeding today

I don`t know why you hurt me so

I don` know why you turned so cold

you closed all doors,you return my mail

do you enjoy putting me through hell

Do you really believe those lies

you didn`t even ask me,i was surprised

do you really know me,i don`t think you do

if you did you know I`d never be untrue...

Reviews

[Devanshu Rajput]

I very very dark poem. I myself can feel the pain that you want to convey. Last line thrilled me.

I liked the rhyme scheme.

Thanks for sharing this.

Devanshu

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[RomaJ]

After listening to the song and reading your lovely poem. It's even more heart breaking, when it's someone you love and trust who "should've known you" that stabs you in the back. And because they know you, the pain is even worse and takes longer heal.

Truly beautiful poem, wordman

[wordman]

you are too kind roma j,thank you

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

This song and the poem
go hand-in-hand like
two lovers he painted the story
like it was true it just came alive.


thank you for sharing and
thank you for stopping
by my page.


And I love this song
thank you for sharing.

God bless Benita

[wordman]

thank you,i like the song too

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're welcome my friend.
Benita

[Perkele.7885]

a great poem and a great accompanying song. What could be better?

[wordman]

thank you,wine and cake

[Tom]

' Only the good die young' , well, some may say but they certainly feel the pain more than some less morally challenged individuals !

Soulful and poignant, always the best ingredients for an emotive write such as this !

[wordman]

thanks tom

[Henryglass]

Beautiful heartbreaking read. Thanks for sharing.

[wordman]

I thank you for the visit

[Mars Bear]

Really lyrical feel to this. Could imagine a dark but acoustic composition over the top. Real pained sadness.

[wordman]

it is a tear jerker I guess,thanks

[Pryde Foltz]

A judgement from another is almost always a weakness they feel in themselves … be sure to shine you incomparable light on those who love you in return:)

[wordman]

I always do pryde,and your my number one

[Pryde Foltz]

That's sweet:)

[s y e]

Oh my, this one hurts my heart, Ron. The emotion in this is so strong, I know how this feels and I am sure a lot do but those who don't, will be able to feel the heartache through your words.

~ Great job bud!

[wordman]

thank you,i can bring that pain and that love