In Memory of Love

In memory of love

I take my pen in hand and I

let my emotions spill on to the canvas

Watch

as I paint a picture of pain and heartache

we are meant to be with one another

we fit together as one when we`re apart

so much pain and sorrow comes from the heart

I need your touch

your sweet kiss

it`s you babe,the one that I miss

so please come back home

don`t know how long my heart can hold on

I need you so much,and I always will

I cry each night when I go to bed

it`s the sleep that I dread cause when

I sleep I dream of you and the things

we used to do

You know darling

that I`m still in love with you

so tell me baby

that you love me too...

Reviews

[Jimmy Yetts]

A heartrendingly lovely declaration.
Amazingly well done, wordman!

[W R Stowe]

This is an awesome display of heart felt love and the pangs of agony we develop in their absence. I all to well know these feelings and it was from loving someone that manipulated this love from me but since then I surrendered to God and he brought my current wife into my life and now I know what its like to be loved in truth and spirit she is no doubt my soul mate

[Taylor]

Hi, Wordman, I could see this set to music and sung by some soulful country music singer. It evokes my own thoughts of lost love and isn't that what every writer hopes to do, to connect in a mystical way with others? Well done. Taylor

[MOON]

Lyrical write beautifully penned.

[Lola_Bee]

wow this is so beautiful and so raw. how brave to lay it out, the deepest part the heart feels. bravo

[...]

It's a killer letting go of the part of you you loved through someone else. That ability to give and take and share. I wish you luck, dear poet...

[~]

A poem written from a heart that loves. I hope she comes back.

[Gee]

Beautifully written,you at your best.Very well done

[J. J. Nightingale]

Sweet... heart tugging ..and a little sad...

Nothing can replace..Love..


Jazz