My valentine

My darling

we`ve been together for

forty one years

we`ve shared laughter

and we`ve shared our tears

but together we stand

we have lost some

on our way,but we know

we will see them again one day

you captivated my heart

years ago, with your smile

and your eyes a glow

and all these little faces

we see running around

it was our love that brought

them around

so my darling

one more year,one more time

I wish you a happy valentines...

Reviews

[Mirab Irfan]

Oh My.
The most romantic poem! Beautifully penned :)

[wordman]

you are too sweet,thanks

[Tom]

A most endearing romantic poem that would surely send cupid's arrow straight into its intended target ?

[wordman]

thank you for the visit tom

[Einstein Noodle]

fine sentiments for a love so true! sorry i missed it on V-day ... it truly does my heart good to celebrate you 41 yrs. together right along with you .. so many broken relationships these days .. you and your valentine are rare and priceless .. best of good fortune to you both!
E.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[sereenaoutloud]

this is so romantic Wordman ... i especially love
"and all these little faces
we see running around
it was our love that brought
them around"
Beautiful picture this creates!!

[wordman]

thank you sereena,i appreciate the visit

[Perkele.7885]

This is a nice little dittie you have written here! 41 years is a good long time and I commend both you and your Valentine for setting the bar so high for us to admire.

[wordman]

I thank you for stopping by

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wow 41 years and you're still writing valentines...that's awesome :)

[wordman]

it sounded good lynn,thank you

[sinNsincerity]

Beautiful write sir! Such a delight.

[wordman]

thank you sin for the review

[catwoman]

wow that is so beautiful and romantic :)

[wordman]

thank you for stopping by