My valentine

My darling

we`ve been together for

forty one years

we`ve shared laughter

and we`ve shared our tears

but together we stand

we have lost some

on our way,but we know

we will see them again one day

you captivated my heart

years ago, with your smile

and your eyes a glow

and all these little faces

we see running around

it was our love that brought

them around

so my darling

one more year,one more time

I wish you a happy valentines...

Reviews

[luvs2write]

That has to be about the sweetest poem I've read. =) Keep writing!!

[wordman]

and that's about the sweetest comment,and I thank you

[armin]

nice beautiful and a lovely piece of poetry ron.

armin. ..

[wordman]

what!you didn`t bring any candy lol you know I appreciate you

[jennifer little]

Beautiful poem great write keep up the great work

[wordman]

thanks for the visit

[jennifer little]

Your welcome

[SmittyJas]

Beautiful verses beautiful song hoping you two shared a great glass of wine. Happy Valentine's

[wordman]

smitty ,I appreciate your visit

[MsJewel]

The perfect poem for the one you love on Valentines Day. Stunning writing Ron!

:) Julie

[wordman]

thanks Julie,maybe one day I`ll get the hang of it lol

[MsJewel]

I think you have the hang of it Ron. This is lovely! :) Julie

[Fran Marie]

A beautiful endearing write for your special Valentine..very sweet and loving..congratulations on 41 years

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Fran Marie]

You're welcome,

[katja]

*sigh* Ron, this a lovely, romantic piece written with a tender pen...
... thank you for sharing
~yekaterina

[wordman]

and I thank you for reading 41 years sounded better than 23
but what the hell I can exaggerate a little

[katja]

you're welcome...
... you're entitled to poetic licence from time to time :)

[wordman]

I am hard headed ,and set in my way`s

[Jamestown]

Wordman, that is so sweet my friend, congrats on 41 and I pray
for your on going health and happiness.

[wordman]

I appreciate your visit james