Paradise`s Loft

I cry out to God

with no avail

afraid to die

afraid of hell

placed here

through no fault

of my own

a cake on the table

but told not to eat

when I did my life

would be complete

angels and demons

pulling from both sides

I`m rolling in an ocean

being pulled under by the tide

no place to run

no place to hide

all my emotions

building up inside

paradise a place of beauty

and a place of lust

brought to us from

the man of dust

eve,

now twice deceived

after that demonic encounter

now time to conceive

cain brought forth

from the pitts of hell

now here on earth

the demons do dwell

so when you read

all about isis

think of eve

in her crisis...

Reviews

[Ruth]

Such a connection to all faith threaded...the journey is often hard and paved with obstacles and fear in places but if we shelter in the universal intention, we are never alone and can identify the road ahead...we have to face the dark side to self in order to be light sometimes...only then can we move forward and reach out, great piece hon xo

[Pryde Foltz]

Someone once said the line between good and evil runs through every man … if one faces their own dark side they come to understand their brother's and the heeling begins. Great write, Ron. Great allusions and rhyme.

[Cassie]

lovely write and it has made me think wide

[armin]

A good write, thoughts provoking.

Spidey. ...

[MsJewel]

powerful words my friend.

:) Julie

[katja]

a thought provoking piece, well written Ron...
... tiny critique... paradise is spelled incorrectly in the title
&
s4 l3 should be "an ocean"
*
otherwise, not a bone to pick with you here...
... thank you for sharing your pen
~yekaterina