Paradise`s Loft

I cry out to God

with no avail

afraid to die

afraid of hell

placed here

through no fault

of my own

a cake on the table

but told not to eat

when I did my life

would be complete

angels and demons

pulling from both sides

I`m rolling in an ocean

being pulled under by the tide

no place to run

no place to hide

all my emotions

building up inside

paradise a place of beauty

and a place of lust

brought to us from

the man of dust

eve,

now twice deceived

after that demonic encounter

now time to conceive

cain brought forth

from the pitts of hell

now here on earth

the demons do dwell

so when you read

all about isis

think of eve

in her crisis...

Reviews

[...]

'm not a chritian but I respect others beliefs. This was nicely done :)

[W R Stowe]

Isis is the seed of Cain and are envious of the sacrifice of selfless love the plot and plan took place in the garden of Eden nice write wordman

Bill

[catwoman]

it's a really great poem..i love the wordings..

[Jimmy Yetts]

"no place to run
no place to hide."

Men are certainly being tested; often seeming spiritually immobilized--souls pinned down like struggling insects.
Yet, while they may, at times, not be feeling it, Christians know Who is their refuge.
Still, God's people grow increasingly weary of Evil's stench searing their nostrils.
And many yearn for that final battle.
Uniquely excellent work, Wordman!

[Melinda McQueen]

Such a great poem with truth weaved all through.
A great write. Be blessed.

[Jamestown]

This is terrific! So powerful, that last stanza is brilliant! Raw and real,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Valentine]

Sadly many nations of the world, not just our own are being pulled away from good and toward evil. Deep write. Valentine

[Fran Marie]

Always a struggle between the good verses evil ...to be sure..like the last verse...sin has created a messy world..

[Miss Sharon]

(so when you read all about isis think of eve in her crisis...) I sense a foreboding prophetic revelation here my friend! I enjoyed this write and like the every other line rhyme scheme. ~Sharon