You fell in love with a memory

You fell in love

with a memory

as you read my poetry

you read my heart

You saw right through me

right from the start

 you read my mind

you read my soul

I touched you,i know

You could feel the love

and you could feel my pain

from the words

my heart would bring

You fell in love

with a memory

wrote from my heart

for you, from me...

Reviews

[Perkele.7885]

I got a feel for a little of your passion in this piece. Always a good thing to feel a bit of the author in his work. It's just like a painter''s signature on one of their paintings. If there is no signature, you still have a great idea who painted the piece. You read enough of me, you will see what I mean!

[wordman]

you are a true detective my friend ,thanks

[armin]

very nice ron ,a lovely write.

armin. ..

[Joyce S. Greene]

Your heart always sings when you write, Ron, and that makes your poetry very beautiful. Your wife is a lucky woman. Write on! Joyce

[wordman]

thanks for the visit joyce

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. I missed this one. You do write from the heart and touch from the start...Excellent...:)................

[wordman]

just another poet in a big world and I thank you

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).................

[B.J]

Ha! you are just a romantic at heart. That is lovely

[wordman]

thank you,i appreciate your comments

[B.J]

Had to laugh well done

[Vanesa Markovic]

Beautiful!
You write perfectly what great poetry should be about, a sharing of experience.
Lovely!

[wordman]

your going to make a ham out of me lol i wish i could write

[Vanesa Markovic]

"you're going to make a ham out of me" might just be my new favorite saying, haha!
You can write sir, you definitely can!
-VM

[Vanesa Markovic]

As Chi-Chi Rodriguez said, no one is so rich as to throw away a friend!
You probably have no idea who I'm talking about, but I felt it was an appropriate reference, haha.
-VM

[wordman]

no I didn`t, but the message is clear