I got a feel for a little of your passion in this piece. Always a good thing to feel a bit of the author in his work. It's just like a painter''s signature on one of their paintings. If there is no signature, you still have a great idea who painted the piece. You read enough of me, you will see what I mean!
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
you are a true detective my friend ,thanks
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This reminds me of my wife and I because I often wondered if she fell in love with my poetry about her or just me I no longer wonder that because it was me and the poetry just helped it along very nice write wordman
Bill
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
the story behind this ,is a woman falls in love with a poet, and he`s writing about his memories
10 Years Ago
Pretty much what I do with all the poems I wrote for my wife and I'm the poet you hit my life in you.. read morePretty much what I do with all the poems I wrote for my wife and I'm the poet you hit my life in your poem
10 Years Ago
that's when you know you did a good write,when it touches someones heart
wm, There are unfortunate twists in the game of love in which the building blocks of a love are toppled like buildings in a tsunami. When that occurs there is often nothing left but the memories of when love still stood tall and proud. So we often cling to these memories like a lifesaver from a capsized boat, forgetting to consider the present truths. Very nicely done! take care...dan
People very often fall in love with the memory of a person, which could become problematic at times for, once that memory dies, you are facing the real person and then, he/she would seem a total stranger to you.
Your lines are beautiful.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
you are too kind,but I thank you for your visit
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It seems I keep coming back to reread this beautiful write. I am placing it in my favorites list..Valentine
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
lord sometimes I can write,thank you , if I come up missing you can find me at post poems . com read morelord sometimes I can write,thank you , if I come up missing you can find me at post poems . com
word_man
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Outstanding song and perfect poetry for the song. Easy to love a memory. Distance make the pain less painful and the memory more sweeter. I like and understand this poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry my friend.
Coyote
just ask, golden glove boxer years ago,us army veteran ,a contractor is how i make my living,
i am an amateur writer.. been here since june of 2013,couldn`t write then,still can`t.but who cares
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