You fell in love with a memory

You fell in love

with a memory

as you read my poetry

you read my heart

You saw right through me

right from the start

 you read my mind

you read my soul

I touched you,i know

You could feel the love

and you could feel my pain

from the words

my heart would bring

You fell in love

with a memory

wrote from my heart

for you, from me...

Reviews

[Perkele.7885]

I got a feel for a little of your passion in this piece. Always a good thing to feel a bit of the author in his work. It's just like a painter''s signature on one of their paintings. If there is no signature, you still have a great idea who painted the piece. You read enough of me, you will see what I mean!

[wordman]

you are a true detective my friend ,thanks

[silent poet]

This piece is wonderful. written very tasteful and you seem to complete things well. nothing lingering just true beauty from beginning to end..

[wordman]

thank you,i rarely send out rr`s

[MsJewel]

A gentle and charming piece Ron. Quite lovely.

:) Julie

[wordman]

thank you julie

[Kim_poet76]

Beautifully written and touched my soul very much.

[wordman]

you are too kind,thank you

[B]

Oh how gentle

i love this piece

Poems are always memories that live forever

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[B]

My pleasure

[John Alexander McFadyen]

There is again a soulful element to this writing. Strange how poetry and reading it can provoke such strong emotions and give us a clue as to the author's character.

[wordman]

thank you john for the visit

[John Alexander McFadyen]

The owners of Writers Cafe should be ashamed of themselves for allowing this clown to keep up these attacks from his multiple identities!

[Woody]

tender and romantic. love the idea that triggered it. your poems are always written with feeling and sincerity, if that makes sens.
great song and gorgeous pictures to go with it.

[wordman]

thanks for the visit woody,i try to put my soul in my writing

[Woody]

trust me, it shows.