A Silent Tear

It seems i have fallen from your grace

i no longer see your face

so i sit to write but the words wont come

Tears roll down my face

it seems i have fallen from your grace

down trodden and all alone

no one to call upon

A deaf ear has now taken the place

of my god and his grace

though i walk through the valley of death

i do fear evil i feel alone my heart cold

and out of place

On my knees

on my face

praying to god to once

more show me his face

But not a sound

do i hear

only feel the warmth

of a single tear...

Author's Note

will ad music when i can find one to match

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

But not a sound
do i hear
only feel the warmth
of a single tear...

Grace speaks in many ways. A very beautiful spiritual write, Ron.

[wordman]

thanks,depends on which mood i was in pryde lol

[Samuel Pennell]

This is really great, Wordman! Great pacing to it, and I loved that it established a single tone/atmosphere of sadness and stuck with it. I knew what to feel from it. Great cadence with the rhymes, but changing up the subjects. Being a spiritual person, I also liked the Bible references. All around, really solid work.

[wordman]

thank you sam,one of my feeling forsaken moments

[Samuel Pennell]

It came across sadly and beautifully. Nothing wrong with the melancholic pieces. It is true and real.

[wordman]

thanks again my friend

[Sami Khalil]

A sad but hopeful prayer of the heart. God never leaves us nor forsake us. Blessings...:).........

[wordman]

thanks for the visit,it`s an old write

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. Antique is good and valuable...LOL

[wordman]

yeap they are

[Sami Khalil]

:)::::::::::::::::::::::::::

[wordman]

sent out a rr for this she sent message where is it i re posted temp

[Sami Khalil]

Happy Holidays

[B.J]

That is so magic. Well done

[wordman]

thank you b j

[B.J]

your welcome