A Silent Tear

It seems i have fallen from your grace

i no longer see your face

so i sit to write but the words wont come

Tears roll down my face

it seems i have fallen from your grace

down trodden and all alone

no one to call upon

A deaf ear has now taken the place

of my god and his grace

though i walk through the valley of death

i do fear evil i feel alone my heart cold

and out of place

On my knees

on my face

praying to god to once

more show me his face

But not a sound

do i hear

only feel the warmth

of a single tear...

Author's Note

will ad music when i can find one to match

Reviews

[sereenaoutloud]

you can tell these would be great song lyrics by the way they flow.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[nazia]

Even without music you have aptly conveyed what was intended.. so hats off for that..
Message well chosen

[wordman]

thank you very much

[nazia]

You're welcome

[Miss Sharon]

I would like to add that I LOVE the photo graphic! Where did you find it? I would like to see others the site may have along these same lines. Thanks! ~Sharon

[wordman]

it is actually, a video from you tube

[Miss Sharon]

(Tears roll down my face it seems i have fallen from your grace down trodden and all alone no one to call upon) I've been in this place many times throughout my life and you've captured the unbelievable inner turmoil quite well. As Christians we do however know these are lies from the enemy of our soul....but can still we feel this way in the darkness. Great write! ~Sharon

[wordman]

now if I could just learn that piano,thank you Sharon purple crayon
are you sluming or are you here

[Miss Sharon]

I'm now posting poetry at Writers Cafe as well as The Starlite Cafe....I like them both!

[Valentine]

I think many of us have felt this way sometime in their life. I had seizures for 10 years, and cried out to God but He did not answer my prayers the way I wanted. In that ten years I read the whole Bible, and turned my whole life over to him. After that a 3 year old girl lay hand on me and prayed for my healing. I was healed instantly, no more seizures. No more hospitals trying to find the cause etc,, I thank Him every day..Kathie He took that 10 years to show and teach me the way to Him.

[wordman]

I`ve been a Christian most of my life,he has me here for a reason,,i mean in the place I am with him wandering,and yes my sister prayed for a womans leg it was shorter than the other it grew in front of every body. a nd I think tk is actually possessed and this may have been planned

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Nice ending --wraps it up nicely!

[wordman]

thank you for the review Josie,your always`s welcome