A Silent Tear

It seems i have fallen from your grace

i no longer see your face

so i sit to write but the words wont come

Tears roll down my face

it seems i have fallen from your grace

down trodden and all alone

no one to call upon

A deaf ear has now taken the place

of my god and his grace

though i walk through the valley of death

i do fear evil i feel alone my heart cold

and out of place

On my knees

on my face

praying to god to once

more show me his face

But not a sound

do i hear

only feel the warmth

of a single tear...

Author's Note

will ad music when i can find one to match

Reviews

[GreenShoes]

A sad story, beautifully told.

[wordman]

thank you,this is where a lot of us come from

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feeling unworthy or forgotten; an outward plea, of sorts, that ends with a little dampness of home in that single "warm tear"... perhaps he was in the warmth of that tear... a nice write, Ron

[jeannemarie coulter]

a singularly beautiful song i would love to hear...well done...

[wordman]

thank you jc

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Amazing......
heartfelt.......
video compliments very well.....
god works in mysterious ways........there is a saying in India which roughly translates as ".....there is delay in God's office........but never a rejection........."
beautiful poem....
i loved it!!!
:)

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome..........!!! :) :)

[W R Stowe]

Ah but God hears the prayers of every single tear but sometimes the answer could be no but whom are we to question God's reasoning oh by the way how about 96 tears by the mysterians

Bill

[wordman]

a great song but not religious and I`m not sure he hears mine at all my friend
a no would be welcome a no response is the norm

[W R Stowe]

Get a DVD titled "Secrets" it will enlighten you in the secular sense but is the same as the Bible teaches but they refer it as the force of nature instead of God but I know it is God and He does hear prayers rest assure

Bill

[wordman]

yes bill I have no doubt he just post pones his answer lol he is testing me or chastizing

[W R Stowe]

[W R Stowe]

I sent you the Gospel version of Tears in Heaven

[wordman]

thank`s I appreciate it

[W R Stowe]

Your welcome

[Jimmy Yetts]

Excellent poetry; heartrending portrayal.
An all-too-familiar state of mind, Wordman.

[wordman]

yeah Frankie ,I think this fits most of us