Lost In Your eyes

 

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

For some reason i think this may be your best that i have read so far maybe it is the way its broken up easy to follow . But im thinking it is because it makes me feel something

[wordman]

it`s all about anticipation of the moment and I thank you

[Tate Morgan]

my pleasure

[Johnson Bobby]

Nicely done you're description of a kiss the feelings involved
In such a pleasure, the softness, wanting it needing it
A simple kiss how charming?


Men have hearts too!


Johnsonbobby

[wordman]

thanks for stopping by and yes we do

[AprilRN1210]

sweet, simple, heartfelt piece. It is simple, but draws you in and leaves you feeling nostalgic to those tender, romantic moments with the one you love. Nice subtle repetition here.. one side note I think it should be lips "touch" mine not touches.. overall good job..

[wordman]

thanks for the visit you are always welcome

[Jwala]

wow, lovely version of love :)

[wordman]

thank you very much for the visit

[Heartfelt]

As a hopeless romantic, I truly appreciate this poetry. Beautifully written!

[wordman]

and thanks for the visit that's about all I write

[Sami Khalil]

Whoa wordman. Sooo beautiful....

[wordman]

thank you sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).....

[Brittany Zedalis]

╰☆╮This is absolutely beautiful.╰☆╮

[wordman]

thanks for the visit always a pleasure

[MsJewel]

This is exactly how love should be. A wonderfully passionate poem my friend.

:) Julie

[wordman]

thanks julie

[Pryde Foltz]

We are one
our hearts locked
our souls entwined …

I think that is what it is supposed to be like. Wonderful penning, Ron.

[wordman]

thank you pryde for reading