Lost In Your eyes
A Poem by
wordman
VIDEO
I get lost
when I look into
your eyes
My heart beats
in rhythm with yours
as my soul entwines
My body swaying
like a leaf blowing
in the wind
You kiss me
my journey begins
as your sweet lips
touches mine
All my inibituans
I leave behind
as your body sways
and touches mine with
the rhythm of your mind
We are one
our hearts locked
our souls entwined ...
© 2020 wordman
Reviews
This is so lush and sensual and flows like the love it speaks of. Quite beautiful :)
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
thank you lynn for reading my humble poetry
Ahhh I bet this gal is very lucky....you are so romantic at heart! Nicely inked.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Ahhh I bet this gal is very lucky....you are so romantic at heart! Nicely inked.
9 Years Ago
i am a romantic person i guess,thank you
Very romantic wordman with a great free flowing verse good job pal
Bill
Posted 9 Years Ago
Very romantic wordman with a great free flowing verse good job pal
Bill
9 Years Ago
thanks for the review bill
Another great song-write. Enjoyed it. I'd like to know if the word "Inibituans" belongs to something deep, because, as far as I know, it's "Inhibition"... but I think, "Inibituans" has something more so.. I'd like to know the exact meaning of it, if you don't mind.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Another great song-write. Enjoyed it. I'd like to know if the word "Inibituans" belongs to something deep, because, as far as I know, it's "Inhibition"... but I think, "Inibituans" has something more so.. I'd like to know the exact meaning of it, if you don't mind.
9 Years Ago
inner feelings instead of outer feelings,thanks
Such a sweet love poem. I could feel the emotion in which you wrote it.
Thank you for sharing such a beautiful piece.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Such a sweet love poem. I could feel the emotion in which you wrote it.
Thank you for sharing such a beautiful piece.
9 Years Ago
thank you Melinda for the visit sweet writes comes from sweet people lol
A very sweet write, I am sure she enjoyed it when you read it to her. Valentine
Posted 9 Years Ago
A very sweet write, I am sure she enjoyed it when you read it to her. Valentine
9 Years Ago
I haven't read it to any one,thank you for reading
9 Years Ago
HUM....what are you waiting for?
9 Years Ago
let me think on that one for a while
9 Years Ago
See, you are a BRAT!
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Added on June 29, 2014
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wordman hixson, TN
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just ask, golden glove boxer years ago,us army veteran ,a contractor is how i make my living,
i am an amateur writer.. been here since june of 2013,couldn`t write then,still can`t.but who cares
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