Love Story

As I lie here by your side

my head on your breast`s

I can feel your heart beat

deep inside

Your skin feels so soft

against mine

your sweet embrace

your tender size

You don`t realize

but sometime`s I just lay and

watch you sleep

I can see the dreams sweeping

through your mind

I can feel the love from inside

you`re so special to me I love you so I just can`t

seem to find the words

to tell you so

So please don`t think

that I don`t care

it`s just the words

I don`t know how to share

So I wrote this poem

just for you

so you`ll know

how much I love you...

Reviews

[Tiana]

Such a beautiful poem, Ron ...Tenderly expressed and the music goes hand in hand with your poem.

[DoormanDan]

This is a very sweet poem you've written here sir! Sometimes it can be hard to let the one we love know how much we love them. This is a beautiful poem that's charged with emotion!

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Beautiful stanza's lines here.


"Your skin feels so soft

against mine

your sweet embrace

your tender size"



"You don`t realize

but sometime I just lay and

watch you sleep"



very romantic this is love.


it is a beautiful think to watch
your love sleep or listening to the
pitter patter of their heart beat
to feel the touch of their skin.



Thank you for sharing this stunning piece
and the song goes
perfect with this piece.


God bless. Benita

[ksscampos]

beautiful! this is a special poem. thanks for sharing

[Frieda P]

A sigh on your page Ron, you had me at 'watch you sleep'....luverly music too.

' breasts' doesn't need an apostrophe unless you're taking possession ;)

[Sami Khalil]

"Your skin feels so soft
against mine
your sweet embrace
your tender size

You don`t realize
but sometime I just lay and
watch you sleep"

[Coyote Poetry]

Good music and amazing poetry. Never a bad poem when written for the emotion of love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Lydia Shutter]

Very sweet and romantic, Ron. I hope she reads it and knows it comes from your heart. Lydi**

[Johnson Bobby]

Beautiful keeping yourself aware of the World
And your ability to love someone so true!