Love Story

As I lie here by your side

my head on your breast`s

I can feel your heart beat

deep inside

Your skin feels so soft

against mine

your sweet embrace

your tender size

You don`t realize

but sometime`s I just lay and

watch you sleep

I can see the dreams sweeping

through your mind

I can feel the love from inside

you`re so special to me I love you so I just can`t

seem to find the words

to tell you so

So please don`t think

that I don`t care

it`s just the words

I don`t know how to share

So I wrote this poem

just for you

so you`ll know

how much I love you...

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

"it`s just the words
I don`t know how to share... "

One of my fav. lines... by the edge of whole poetry or song. Your stuffs're always full of deep insights - the thoughts of 'bout love. Enjoyed reading it!

[alf]

Hi wordman. You write, I think, from your own experience. At least, that's the message I keep getting from reading your poems. You don't try to imagine the feelings, you live them and this poems says that in a loud voice. Loved this, alf

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So sweet :) I'm sure she was deeply moved. beautiful

[nazia]

Beautiful expression of love. a captivating piece.... I hope the person knows that you wrote such an amazing poem to display your love :)