Memories

In the misty waters

of my mind

I reminisces of the hallowed

memories that I left behind

Once as vivid

as night and day

now only misty memories

slowly fading away

Fading away

like a gentle breeze

on a summer`s day

but every thing must fade away

Even those hallowed memories

of me and you and the love

that we once knew...

Reviews

[Aethereal]

This poem reminds me of that old Southern song “Jeanie with the light brown hair” as she’s fading like a vapor in the song writer's memory. I love those old romantic Southern songs. Yes, everything fades, but delightfully so. In your first verse perhaps, “ I reminisce all those hallowed”. Replace “summers” with “Summer’s”.