Memories

In the misty waters

of my mind

I reminisces of the hallowed

memories that I left behind

Once as vivid

as night and day

now only misty memories

slowly fading away

Fading away

like a gentle breeze

on a summer`s day

but every thing must fade away

Even those hallowed memories

of me and you and the love

that we once knew...

Reviews

[MsJewel]

It is sad when memories start to fade...even those special memories we hold close in our hearts turn misty over time. You have penned this well my friend.

:) Julie

[s y e]

Ah this is stunning, Ron. I really enjoyed this one. I really love how you write your poems. Each stanza is powerful and stands out... Lovely.

[Sami Khalil]

One of your best in my humble opinion...Bravo...................

[Pryde Foltz]

Once as vivid
as night and day
now only misty memories
slowly fading away

Fading away
like a gentle breeze
on a summer`s day
but every thing must fade away

Great piece. You nailed the parallelism with these two stanzas. Sublime.

[stars are far]

That was good work, well done :)