Unchain my heart

Unchain my heart

it`s tearing me apart

love lost sad but true

and now I`m losing you

Love hurts

especially when it leaves

blowing in the wind

like falling leaves

The rain falling on my soul

where once our love used to grow

now just dying embers

where roses will never grow

But one day the wind will blow

the dust from my soul

and a new love will grow...

Reviews

[Aethereal]

I could feel that mood of loss in this poem. Your poem sings. I was inspired to make your first verse sing even better by writing this tiny gift song-poem for you to keep as your own: Sing along:

Blue

Now I’m turning blue
as I fall apart
over losing you.
Please unchain my heart.

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is truly beautiful my friend.Sad and bittersweet and absolutely greatly penned :)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. In its simplicity I feel the power of emotions and the falling of rain. Bravo..............

[stars are far]

I truely liked that..its vivid..full of emotions and rhymes..
Well done dear friend