Unchain my heart

Unchain my heart

it`s tearing me apart

love lost sad but true

and now I`m losing you

Love hurts

especially when it leaves

blowing in the wind

like falling leaves

The rain falling on my soul

where once our love used to grow

now just dying embers

where roses will never grow

But one day the wind will blow

the dust from my soul

and a new love will grow...

Reviews

[Kamari's]

Beautiful is the word that describes this and very touching

[Pryde Foltz]

But one day the wind will blow
the dust from my soul
and a new love will grow…

Here's to that day, Ron. Loved this piece.

[s y e]

Ron, this is something else. I love how although it is sad, there is hope shining through your words. We need to keep the faith and keep hoping!

[Ruth]

Is a sad time to let go...but inevitably we do move on, this is beautifully surrendered hon x

[Taylor_McCutcheon]

you just need commas to help with the flow but its another beautifully written poem. I enjoyed it

[just Penny]

Love the sentiments here of loss and renewal after a relationship ends. The line "rain falling on my soul" is beautiful as I always equate rain with cleansing and giving life. Enjoyed it very much. Penny

[MsJewel]

Bittersweet and beautiful Ron. I love the ray of hope at the end. Stunning writing my friend and a gorgeous little love song.

:) Julie

[Cierra]

Very nice. I liked the way it flowed and message was damn near on spot!

[Bright Ocean Star]

I like this, Sami. Ever hopeful. Life and love go on...the human heart has the capacity to love again, if only a chance is given. Very nice write.