That Moment in Time

A moment in time

funny how it can

last a life time

A lost love

a first kiss

a moment in time

that you will always reminisce

Your first date

your first time

memories you keep

tucked away in your mind

Some times when your alone

you reminisce of all the memories

that you have known

You dream of all the things you miss

you wish you could go back in time

and re capture that moment in time...

Reviews

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

I can envision this one on a greeting card in a store....beautiful!

[Indra Neil]

if only we could have a time machine to go back and savor those lost moments! your beautiful write evokes a sense of nostalgia with a tinge of sadness! well done!!

[W R Stowe]

reminisce of times gone by! I do this in my music and mind continuously everyday seems that even in Spirit we see how much greater of faith the apostles had compared to today I wish I had even half the faith they had and I would be moving many mountains that prevent our witness of faith very nice poem wordman

Bill

[Valentine]

How true this write is. I really love it, This is one of yours I like the best> Valentine