If You Were Mine

I look into your eyes

I see the pain with in

let me hold you sweet heart

tonight I will be your friend

If you were my girl

if your love was mine

my eyes could only see you

my heart would be blind

A sweet kiss each morning

hold you tight at night

we would slip nude in our hot tub

on a moon lite night

If you were my girl

if your love was mine

I would love you forever

if only you were mine...

Reviews

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

Bravo....another soft and romantic write....very touching!

[wordman]

havent seen these in a while,get to enjoy the music..thank you

[Adam Adams]

"A sweet kiss each morning.. hold you tight at night.. " Beautiful romantic lines where you express the intense inner feelings of your heart.. in words. Enjoyed reading your words. It's kinda refreshing one!

[wordman]

thank you adams

[Coyote Poetry]

I can feel the song in the words.
"If you were my girl
if your love was mine
I would love you forever
if only you were mine..."
I like the positive energy and the want for the girl. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[wordman]

john i appreciate your visit

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Valentine]

Lovely write, filled with longing for something just out of reach. Sweet write. Valentine

[wordman]

thank you kathie