Something Beautiful Just Died

Something beautiful just died

as I stood by

and watched I cried

 

Was I right

or was I wrong

should I have let it go on

to see where maybe it would have gone

 

Would it have brought joy

or would it have brought pain

shall we try again

are you lonesome tonight

do you wonder if we were wrong or right

 

Do you wonder

what it would be like

if we were together tonight

do you still love me

I know that you do

and you know that I love you too

 

I could picture you by my side

as we traveled through time

holding hands,laughing,talking,making plans

 

But now it`s all gone,gone away

I wonder if it will come back another day

probably not but who can tell

 

And when it left it didn't say goodbye

it broke my heart ,it made me cry

should I come back shall we try again

or just say our goodbyes

and let it end...

Reviews

[Shaquana Adams]

I like how you wrote this. Nicely penned :)

-QuanaWana

[wordman]

and I thank you for reading

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I understand this to a tee Ron, Man all I been thinking, I have had people tell me to be the better one in all to just leave her and walk away. My gosh its hard, Funny thing is I been hurt a bunch and you would had thought I didn't want to feel it again. I really didn't ,but this was the one I couldn't let go no matter what. But like I said in your other poem its over now. I do wonder if she will ever speak to me again. I know we will cross paths we always do always have for some strange reason.

[wordman]

and we always come back for more like an old hound dog lol thanks for the visit
I will be in Benton Tuesday to bid a job

[0000000000000000000000000000]

Yeah guess so but I don't have anymore to come back too, cool Ron idk where that is but sure you will tell me.

[wordman]

50 miles due east of chattanooga

[0000000000000000000000000000]

Ohhh ok Ron

[Pryde Foltz]

I could picture you by my side
as we traveled through time
holding hands,laughing,talking,making plans

These moments are always the hardest. The feeling remain but they are oceans away from mattering. Great one.

[wordman]

well pryde it is a honor to hear from you thank`s

[Ahena MK]

I could picture you by my side
as we traveled through time
holding hands,laughing,talking,making plans ...

really well written !!
ahena :)

[HeazerH]

This was a sad, but enriching read. Thanks for writing it.

[wordman]

thank you for reading send rr if you have any new writes or an older one

[HeazerH]

Thanks. I'll be sending them for sure. Send them to me as well.

[wordman]

I hardly send rr

[HeazerH]

Ill check your page from time to time then :)

[wordman]

thanks glad to have you as a friend

[HeazerH]

Same :) :)

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is very heartfelt. Wonderful job!

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[maria ( rose)]

lets just kiss and say goodbye. Emotional piece. Well written Ron. The Manhatten*classic/nice song choice

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[maria ( rose)]

no problem at all. I enjoy your poems very much and the music ,,you know that:)))

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is sad .Lost love always is,Wonderfully penned my friend :)

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[A. Amos]

Respect your romantic soul and every single word pouring out from your heart...epic!

[wordman]

thank you for dropping by

[A. Amos]

Always my pleasure