A Fool Such As I

How can you love

a fool such as I

how many times

have I made you cry

I`ve been unfaithful

time and again

stayed gone for

day`s on end

But you would always`s

take me back again

I have hurt you so many times

I can`t count the times

I have let you down

But when I come back

your still around

your love has stood the test of time

But I promise I`ve made you cry

my last time I had love right here

the whole time

If you will forgive me

just one more time

I promise to leave my

cheating ways behind...

Author's Note

this is fiction don`t jump on me for cheating
but I`m sure its true for some

Reviews

[zephyr]

A perfect country number.

[Angie G]

Ah, if only all men could see how much hurt they cause, if only they could be so honest.. Great write!!

[Marie]

THis sounds like a really great country song.

[Zahra]

Very nice, enjoyed reading this.

[00000000000000000000000..]

Woooooooooo Deep stuff Ron I cant say I ever cheated but if I ever did id have bed forgiveness. Ricky did good on the song too:)))))))))))))))))))))

[Sami Khalil]

Your poems touch on the truth of life and relationships. Cheating is devastating to those involved...Excellent...:)............

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Cheating is a ruff subject...
yet the apparent...
theme is present throughout this read...
I see this is fictional...
so no need to get into this in depth...
I have not read one of yours in a while...
I do question the last line:

I promise to leave my
rambling behind...

Since you do put the ...
which leaves the issue open...